What do you think of my story?

Hey again! I think it's pretty good! Anyway, do you remember me? I'm the one you were e-mailing about your story with vampires and werewolves? I replied, don't know if you got it. Anyway, my e-mail is kaysiak@yahoo.com if you want to keep talking. And, I love the Alex In Wonderland story. I had the same story written just like that! :D Anyway, good story.